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Virtual reality by ~iruel:iconiruel:



It's like standing on crystal clear blue ice and watch the water flow beneath.
It's like watching waterfalls with your most loved girl.
Like watching the bird singing you awake in morning.
Like watching your hugbear watch over you before you go to sleep.

The ice begins to crack, the beauty is now danger.
The waterfall dries empty, beauty is all gone.
The bird is hunted, catched and eaten. The sweet sweet music now is silence.
The hugbear is  old, thrown away, taking safety with him.


This is what we all strive for. What we want, need and hunt.
Guess what it is?
Then tell me..is it really this we want?

Perfection. Can it be achieved?
Is it possible to maintain happiness?


Like a tiger.
Like a car.
It's a flower.
It's a rock.

Sweet, yet dangerous.
Needed, but destructive.
It blossoms, but dies.
Hard, not unbreakable.

Do you really love me?
©2005-2009 ~iruel
:iconiruel:

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Something I often wonder is of this consept. There are as many meanings as there are people.

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:icondeppe:
"Sweet, yet dangerous.
Needed, but destructive.
It blossoms, but dies.
Hard, not unbreakable."

My god how wise words..
I like this,I really do..

"du skildrer ordene jævli godt liksom"

så.. ja, :+fav:

ser ut som det kommer fra hjertet liksom

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Mayhem - De Mysteriis Dom Sathanas..
Best Album Ever IMO
:iconiruel:
:)
I'm pleased to have you to like it.. I did not expect that.. :)

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Truth is the only thing we deny...
:iconjonnyhr:
I'm always moved by what you write my friend. Its never hollow, which I see within some of the other authors here at Deviantart.
If I had your gift, your tallent using words to describe whats inside, to be able to use the written power for both beauty and poison.. then my art wouldnt be as hollow.

Keep writing my friend, and even though you may write for yourself or others.. I see greatness in your future, for your words.

:)

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I shall die in duel, against the only one worthy of defeating me... I died
:iconiruel:
Your words are great. I don't think my words are that good, I try my best to make pictures out of words, since I cannot draw. A single picture can make all the words. But words cannot make a picture in the same way. Art is what you need. What suits you. I envy you of your skill. In many ways, it's art like those you make witch make my words. :)

Thanks. Thats what I just tried to say :)

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Truth is the only thing we deny...
:iconcadjee:
Awesome.. I really like this. As *deppe said, wise words.
I think I've said it before, but I'll say it again. You are talented. There's always something special about your writings. A special feeling, maybe.


:+fav:
:iconiruel:
thanks for kind words. :)
I'm surprised this poem is liked by people, I really don't think it's that good myself :)

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Truth is the only thing we deny...
:iconxephyr-prophet:
I think this is much deeper than what my mind can comprehend right now... I'm really tired, but the piece really catches my attatention, so I promise I'll get back to it later to comment better. :)

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"We are too ugly to play pop, so we decided to fuck shit up again."
-Devin Townsend on SYLs "Alien" album
:iconiruel:
Cya then ;)

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Truth is the only thing we deny...

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